TODO LIST 000525 THE FOLLOWING POINTS REMAIN TO BE ADDRESSED: remaining comments from Weinstein: 10) p7 par1: do we want to mention the p3/2 data-theory disagreement at pmiss = 50 MeV/c? o need to be more clear on the theory status. I think we need to say very clearly that a) we have a one-parameter theory which describes the data incredibly well using the optimal bswf, optical potential, current operator, etc [where optimal is determined from other experiments], and b) we have thoroughly studied the dependence of the theory on these elements so that when the data are no longer described by the theory, we will know where the theory needs to be improved. o have to be clearer about the overlap between relativity in the wave function [spinor distortion] and relativity in the current operator. Since neither is an observable by itself (we only measure expectation values), the proper treatment of relatvity comes from a combination of current operator AND wavefunction. 1) p21 'Contamination': Can we calculate the 2s1d contamination accurately out to 500 MeV/c? How big an effect is this? Does it get bigger with p_miss? 8) p30 tab2: If you have time, add a 2nd column listing the recoil momentum. You might be intimately familiar with what kinematics 'L1' is, but the PAC won't be. 10) p8 fig 5 and p9 fig 6: discuss the 'proj' curves (ie: no negative energy components) 11) p9 fig 6: point out the differential sensitivity of the p1/2 and p3/2 and of the A_LT and R_LT to cc1 vs cc2. 12) p9 fig 6: Why do the rel1 and rel2 curves stop at 500 MeV/c? 13) fig 5 and 6: Question for Udias: Both EMA and 'proj' have reduced effects from relativity. Why does one have bigger wiggles than the full calculation and theother has smaller wiggles??? 16) Appendix 1: the earlier theory study with the bigger plots is easier to read The only other major suggestion is that we have a figure with our expected data including projected uncertainties on a graph of the cross section, log(abs(R_LT)), and A_LT. If that is too much work, we at least need it for A_LT. That will really show what we plan to do. The last question is what we should do about the p3/2 point at kin A1 where the S/N is 0.01? Do we just say that we will either 1) provide a lousy upper bound or 2) discover that the theory is incorrect and there is really some cross section there? We are asking for 8 days to measure at +/-30 degrees so this is a lot of beamtime. remaining comments from Kelly: Most of the time in the 89-003b proposal is used to fill in and extend the pm range for ALT in the valence region. Therefore, the impact of the prooposed measurements would be illustrated best by adding pseudodata with anticipated error bars to versions of Figs. 5-8. I would probably limit pm to not much more than the proposed range (like Figs. 7-8). One would then argue that previous ALT data do not yet strongly exclude EMA-noSV, which misses only the last point for p1/2 and third point for p3/2, and that a more complete pm distribution is need to decide the issue. The question of far in pm one can push these type of calculations reliably remains difficult. Note that the calculations labelled "EMA" in Figs. 5-6 are what I call "EMA-noSV". Unfortunately, Udias and I sometimes use different acronyms. Most of the text refers to my calculations that include SV as EMA; therefore, either the legend should be changed or the surrounding text clarified. What are the normalization factors used with the Ryckebusch calculations? Practically no justification is given for extending the continuum data. What is new physics is sought that is not already known from previous data? Nilanga should be able to show ALT for the continuum, but I still haven't seen that figure. Is it significantly different from the valence states? Will better statistics make an important qualitative difference? In the present form, this part is likely to be axed. The discussion of acceptances for the corners may interest the designers of the experiment, but I think that it is too much for the proposal. remaining comments from Gilad: The main comment that was made is that we need to make clear that although there are many effects that can affect the physics (gauges, current operators, bswf, MEC etc.), we study all of them (Jim is still working on the channel coupling) and we understand that some of them are not going to be relevant, and that we have PREDICTIONS for others. These effects play differently for different p_miss and observables, so we should be able to have an handle on them. I think that the appendix should help to make this point clear, but we should also emphasize it more in the body of the proposal. More than that, the sf extracted (the one parameter) is consistent with the ones extracted for the low Q^2 data. Udias' latest paper and his appendix have very good descriptions of these relationships. We may want to put some of them into the body of the proposal. remaining general comments: - get a new copy of Udias' suite for inclusion, if that is still the plan - a complete and thorough proofread - fill out all the JLab paperwork associated with submitting the proposal - how much time is remaining on the books? - Fig 4: we need to discuss the bound and scattered spinor distortion curves or we need to remove them from the plot.